Lucozire's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'll Be There]

Music weep weep woop woop. Sounds like your style if anything. This song gets:

7 sinewaves out of 3 saws

supermelon-creations responds:

Nicez tho this song prolly comtains much more saws than sinewaves :D

[Move Your Mind]

YOOOOO, thats sick. I'd say its like 8 corona out of 3 plauges. Good work

supermelon-creations responds:

holy crackemoly no way :D

[Dream Deprived]

Abstract is just down my alley, very cool. Altho needs atleast 8 more ott's on the master. 12 serums out of 5 ott's

supermelon-creations responds:

YEAH! tho is 8 ott's enough? I think I should put at least 20 more with a patcher y'know

[Hyper Fern]

Ayo my dog even likes this song, 23 pets out of 8 treats

supermelon-creations responds:

Ayoo woofstep?

[Romantic]

Sheeeesh. Best song yet! Very solid and the vocals are very fresh. This song is the most romantic. 12 Fine dining dinners out of 4 roses!

Good job!

supermelon-creations responds:

I hope the roses don't sting you

[AIM Sitting on the Dock of the Bay]

Very chill, I like I like. Chill vibes 100%, I'd give it 10 misspelled words out of 5 tracks

supermelon-creations responds:

XD yeah, I make a lot of misspellings, if you (or anyone else sees any) feel free to notify me about it

[Childlike Memory]

Nice stuff, I'd say 18 glitches out of 15 vocal chops

supermelon-creations responds:

very trueee bleep bloop beep bop ba

[SONG GO BRRRR]

This music does indeed go BRRRR

17 B's out of 10 R's

supermelon-creations responds:

BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBRRRRRRRRRRR

[As The Rain Drops...]

The main loop is very based and cheesy, i'm assuming you downloaded it from somewere but if not then good job! and as my fellow creator supermelon said I think if it's lo-fi you are aiming for you might wanna decrease the sample quality and eq the drums.

Also missing the bass ;-;

Lofi is my specialty and I can give you a lot of feedback on it.

SomeDud3Beats responds:

i used my brain for the loop tho
yea sure you can give me feedback, since this is my first time making this

[DJVI - Base After Base (SomeDud3Beats rmx)]

Feels like something is missing, maybe like a bass, and also I don't hear any sidechain but that could also be me. The song feels like a 1:1 replica of Base After Base although with the sounds changed and it could be mixed up a bit.

Maybe try to focus on the sound design as many sounds just sounds like presets but that's okay if you have a good balance.

And maybe build up some tension with a Reese and alternate the beats, give four on the floor a chance I think that could improve the song a lot because the alternating pattern is very cheesy.

In the end I believe a lot could be changed as it is rather a remake then a remix of the original. But good luck on future endeavors and if you want more feedback contact me on discord. (You know who I am)

SomeDud3Beats responds:

Okay I've been listening to some of my older tracks at the moment. Yes it doesn't sound really good. Also i had no idea what to add and i do not know how to do some "mixing". Well, now i know how to do those, well, i am not really good at it but yeah. This is just a warm-up and yes it is a remake.