Feels like something is missing, maybe like a bass, and also I don't hear any sidechain but that could also be me. The song feels like a 1:1 replica of Base After Base although with the sounds changed and it could be mixed up a bit.
Maybe try to focus on the sound design as many sounds just sounds like presets but that's okay if you have a good balance.
And maybe build up some tension with a Reese and alternate the beats, give four on the floor a chance I think that could improve the song a lot because the alternating pattern is very cheesy.
In the end I believe a lot could be changed as it is rather a remake then a remix of the original. But good luck on future endeavors and if you want more feedback contact me on discord. (You know who I am)